Try again
The wording didn't make any since that might be because your french. Next time you do make a choice of english make sure your translations are right. Other then that some voice acting and fluidness would help this alot.
Try again
The wording didn't make any since that might be because your french. Next time you do make a choice of english make sure your translations are right. Other then that some voice acting and fluidness would help this alot.
If I put voice acting in the movie, it would be in french.
You can do better
Make it more fluid and better drawn, it could be good...try again
I know it, this video was forgotten in my computer, I found it and I said "why not submit it?"
It kept me
Intriged actually. Make the text alittle more readable and some more fluid animation and I think it could be front page. Good effort.
I fixed everything, now give me my front page >:( Just kidding, thanks for the review.
50/50
Not too bad clean it up alittle and I think youve got something
tnx for comment mr Spark062, really? If i clean it up , it will be more better than before? Hmm.. alright i would edit it and make it more entertaining.., hope to see your comment again mr. Spark062 tnx.. ^_^
it was aight
some more animation some cleanin up...it would be good...btw....do i know you
not bad
I love stick animation and this was pretty good but keep on chuggin
Thanks, I'm glad you like sticks.
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